Saturday, October 13, 2012


Thursday Short Story Slam Week 29: Dramas and Freedom

Inside your body,
There's an ocean of fire.
The water is boiling,
tearful rebirth,
A take of the transforming pills.
The awareness from past failures,
Boom road home,
like mist above the ocean sailors.
The bruises are deepened by salty water,
Imperfect cruises,
Illustrated buoyancy of hope along the shore.
Different docks,
The same suffering,
Wait until 7am,
to share the same boat,
how surprising.


Timonthy Jacobshen Wood said...

enjoy a lovely Saturday.

Sheng Henry Wood said...

detailed and lovely.

Justin Penter Wood said...

deep dig, love the nature, or watery imagery.

Virginia Davis Hargis said...


Kay said...

"different docks the same suffering" poignant!

Taylor Kong Boomer said...


Nataeven FairyAn Fallin said...

dynamic imagery.

Tifiny ishare Moon said...

love the ending,

Nancy Perazil Federle said...

the ending is powerful.

Janet Mooster Zhou said...

what a mind blowing punch.
well done.

Yielday Pittzheng said...

a strong poem.
splendid work.

Sheridan Newsomie Raun said...

love it.

Anonymous said...

nice touch to your writing.. here's my rally..

Sheng Henry Wood said...

mind blowing imagery.

Bing Yap said...

deep and poignant...

Elizena said...

Very deep and touching. There's an internal struggle or war inside of us and sometimes we think we're the only ones who go through these kinds of struggles, but there are so many others out there who are going through similar struggles and feeling the same. We're all in the same boat, but don't seem to realize.
This was a very good read; praying you have a blessed week!

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