Saturday, December 5, 2015

short story slam week 34, and sunday whirligig


 

Short Story Slam Week 34 on Holiday Sentiments


 
 
 
Carpe Diem #873 Deeper into the North: men of this world; picking up rice seedlings; backpack and sword

 
pulling the teeth
from one's spider net mouth
to avoid cheek infection

a crowing cock
chicks yell to wake up their masters
light by dawn

shouts popping out 
alarms scream with begrudge molecules whirling
to drag out wasps

uncle sammi
pointing his figures at lawn trans-passing dogs
a zigzag walk along torrey pines 
  
burke residents
drawing cards to seek unexpected luck
finding out a gold mine in annapolis

Whirligig 36 

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15 comments:

Rachel Gloria Mayer Walsh Schapiro said...

creative.

aspiritofsimplicity said...

love the poetry. I had forgotten all about Sunday Whirly words...I want to start doing that again.

Georgia Koch said...

A lovely post ... you used the words very well indeed ... Bastet

Roger Owen Green said...

tat is one scary Uncle Sam!

ROG, ABCW

Melody Steenkamp said...

Uncle Sam....doesn't mean much to me, not beeing American ofcourse.. but its a good choice for this weeks meme

Have a nice abc-day / - week
♫ M e l ☺ d y <abc-w-team)

annell said...

Enjoyed the read!

Alissa Meredith Jill Osborn Schapiro said...

lovely.

Old Egg said...

Each of these is so intriguing it seems as though that I have walked in the middle of second act and will never be able to work out the plot!

Carol Campbell said...

This feels to me like a day in American life. The holiness of haiku is very hard to capture from the scenarios here but you have taken it and made it very haiku like!

Jim said...

Yikes! I hate pulling teeth, either mine or somebody else's. But I have just the tool for it, a bent pair or needle noosed pliers.
Thank you for visiting, I did #36 just now.
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Mimi Brad Pallin Henry Southworth said...

amazing one.

Christopher Kerry Scott Sophie Johnson said...

handsome!

Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-Walton said...

WONDERFUL.

Sheila Todd Julio Hallelujah Monduwan said...

handsome!

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